Please help me read and critique my humble poem?

The poem itself is very light and airy feeling, reflecting the nature of the poem's contents. I like the rhythm to it, it also adds to the feeling. The words themselves flow very gracefully. Though this is not my usual style, I feel that it has a beauty all its own. The only grammatical suggestion I have is that in line two of the third stanza, you insert a space after the hyphen (changing "...truth so sure-it would..." to "...truth so sure- it would..."). I also like the references to Egypt, as this provides the reader with the ability to make connections- this way, the poem is not so intangible. You have a gift, and I would love to see more of your works. Keep writing!